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Chapter 2 Salvation

  She screamed. It was all she could do. Her sister had just kicked her off a cliff and she had no wings to save her. Her life flashed before her eyes. Her childhood, becoming co-ruler of Equestria, the hate she felt toward those who shunned ger beautiful night, being trapped on the moon for a thousand lonely years, her return to Equestria as Nightmare moon, being defeated, the dungeon, all were shown to her as she fell waiting for the inevitable. Or so she thought.

   In a cave dug into the side of a cliff was a Pegasus pony who had heard Luna's cries for help. He ran to the edge of his cave to see a deep blue alicorn plummet past. He immidietly jumped out of the cave wings spread and dove after her. He flew as fast as he could but the unforgiving ground was only a few thousand meters away. He was so close he just had to get under her. If Luna hadn't passed out from fear she would have seen the jet black Pegasus drop underneath her read to catch her And save her life which he did. With only q few hundred meters to go the Pegasus had gotten below Luna and had begun to carry her back to his cave. The only thing that he couldn't save was her tiara which fell off her head and onto the ground and shattered like her heart when she thought of the family she used to have before her sister got power.

She didn't know it but she was alive. All thanks to the kindness of a stranger.
Chapter 2 I know people are actually liking my story so Im continuing it. Again please comment because it really helps me :)
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Dark1474 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011  Student Digital Artist
This seems like an intresting peice. Just watch out for Mary Sue's, that killed me. I love the emotion in this but there are a few spelling errors. Keep on writing. Also since there isn't that much hate for Celestia anymore, don't expect thousands of views. But I've been wrong before.
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